clutching at my mind
but making my heart glee maliciously
Author notes
moodswing~
A contest entry
- 10x10x20 Quickie by ZachP.
475 points, ended November 22, 2007, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - 75 Words Or Less (Short Poetry - Show Me What You've Got) by xxRainbowDawnxx.
450 points, ended November 25, 2007, 46 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I liked this, it was short but punchy. In retrospect, I wouldn't like to annoy you, you don't seem the type to 'p off' if you know what I mean. Especially when you have those 'moodswings' going on... *but hey, I'm a woman so I know what moodswings are like...la la la PMS*.
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clever you, well done!
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very powerful for ten words
nicely done, and good luck -
Very nice good luck with this
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