I'd like to fly
outside of dreams
i'd take in sights
on gossamer wings
I'd float like a butterfly
to heaven and back
on windswept wings
height i'd not lack
If i could fly like
an eagle soars
I'd venture to places
never seen before
If wings were truly
my form of flight
i'd surely try with
all my might
To go to places
that are torn
and spread the word
of love not war
If i could fly to
places bleak
i'd offer solice to
all i meet
IF
ONLY
I
COULD
FLY...
A contest entry
- Any Poem by justin benecke.
375 points, ended December 25, 2007, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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You just did dear heart!
This poem soars, and sings of peace security and of God s love... Beautiful... Simply precious and beautiful...
~ James ~
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Beautifully and simply expressed.
The ability of flying does fascinate a lot of people.
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Enchanting! I love this poem filled with wonderful imagination.
Very fine, dear poet. 
Yes, if we could fly! That's why I like fairy poems because I like to believe it. 
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This write is very uplifting and makes me want those wings also. Love the imagery and the theme, nicely done
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ahh, yes, one of the impossible dreams of most of us is to fly ^^ i love how calming it is to read because i get to imagine myself doing these in this lovely poem you placed here =]
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Congratulations on Emerald
Thought I commented on this one...This is just beautifully written and with such a wonderful flow...Gives a dreamy feel to the reader and has such simple word choice with deeper meaning...
Blessings sis
Love
~~Cheryl~~
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Pretty wings to fly with and loveing thoughts of peace, my heart wants to bring comfort too - great write!
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Outstanding!!
What a lovely thought!! You have penned a dream so well I'd book a flight with you if I could fly!! Excellent job on this poem dear!! Love it, Don
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How incredibly true, sad as that sounds. Happy thanksgiving to you and yours. Chrissy
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Perhaps someday
on iron wings
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