Mommy was,
Fun, energetic,
Silly and care free.
Time changes things.
Illness stricken,
pain, depression,
Now engulfs the day.
Though you feel my love so strong,
forever I am flawed.
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PROMPT..Flawed
How every day of my life, I feel I am now flawed, and will remain that way forever. Never for my children to know once again, the mother they were born to.
My mother taught me if you have nothing nice to say don't say it at all. We are not here as pros, we are here to share our art and have fun. *grin*
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this one is great too
good job and good luck
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i like this
very good very emotional, this piece reached inside me and tuged at my hart, i felt such empathy with this write. Very good piece of work here!
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This tugged at my heart strings as I could relate to this so completely. Though I not know what you are going through I do know the pain and isolation and the feelings of worthlessness...Be strong fellow poet..for you are not the disease nor is the disease who you are..you co-exist making you the wonderful woman you are with the most wondrous heart. STrong emotion here...thank you for sharing and best of luck to y ou in the contest
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sad
its gonna be ok, I know you must be sick of hearing that by now, but I pray for you and you know I am not religious. So I C it this way he probably owes me a few answered calls. Hugz~
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I think that I can know your feeling, and it must be difficult not to be what you want to be. But in this write I do experience someone with perserverence. Take it day by day. Thank you for teaching us. Good luck with the contest. Frans.
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Nicely said...one thing you must know, you are just the way you where meant to be no better or worse. Hopefully you will someday except that and let the guilt go, so your children can stop feeling it as well...then you all can learn to live.
So sorry for your sickness, but you are not forever flawed...just YOU!!!
Thank you for entering!
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This was very well written. I liked it very much.
...Simply Me♥
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