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politics: blood sucking monster

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Then:


"papyrus" written promises
inked with false hope.


Now:


"type" written promises
inked with false hope.







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15 words

Written November 21, 2007

Inspired by:

"Brevity is the soul of the wit"
-Shakespeare

plus the political promises constantly broken.

Did you know that "Politics" also means "Blood sucking monster".

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  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    November 25, 2007
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    still well done.


  • Naridill
    November 23, 2007

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  • warrior-eagle
    November 22, 2007

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    This is so completely true. And i liked it because not only the "papyrus" "typing" situation were true but what the poem said itself,it was short and sweet.Great.

    ...Simply Me♥