I値l hold on to you day by day
I値l never let you slip away
Your fingers laced between mine
I know we値l both be just fine
Kiss me gently, let it linger for a while
I love the way you make me smile
My heart beats fast with you by my side
Who I am with you will never hide
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loved it!
so far this is my fav. by u. i thought the rhyming was really good and all in all i'd have to say this was AWESOME!
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this is really really good, i know the fealing lol
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Generally a much smoother use of rhyme than one regularly witnesses on the site, which is nice. I enjoyed this read, though the last line is a tad awkward. It might help to remember that there is more to poetry than rhyme, and re-word it with that in consideration.
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oh my goodness that is so amazing! i really like this poem! its really good!
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