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Tragic

Numbess floods my body,
Ripping at my soul,
But lonliness and pain is all I've ever known;
People think I'm okay
They think that I'm alright,
But when they relaized they missed the change
They will wish with all their might,
That somebody had saved me,
I wish someone had tried,
But in darkness late one night,
I became a tragic suicide.

Author notes

Um... idk... it's really not that good... I still have writer's block, soooooooo.... yeah. And kinda 1 & 4 I guess...

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  • brittany.geeze
    November 25, 2007
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    i really really really like this poem.
    i love the sweet tragedy!