Soft caress upon skin,
tracing curves in harmony.
Each tantalizing breath,
builds crescendos of ecstasy.
Perfumed air so sweet,
brings closer, our moment in time.
To reach the hidden gates of heaven,
exploding passions so divine.
Lay silken and bare within my arms,
hearts brimming with romance.
And capture me as your very own
with love's velvet indulgence.
Author notes
Picture prompt
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In a list
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt Quickie by JeannieD Hunter.
900 points, ended November 22, 2007, 14 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This was massively excellent! I melted like chocolite next to a stove. Well deserving of the gold and now my toes are curling and I'm going to drink whisksey and
write hot checks because this poem is sooooo good!
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Great write!
Very nice wording on this!!! Loved it
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The contact oriantation
vocabulary makes this a very phycal and intiment the backgroud i would say is to destacting from a poem balenced between tender sensous and warming passion
remember the rose in the photo was pink.
Warmly passionate.
In ink,
David
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Thanks for the comments, appreciate it.
I will change the background for this, you're correct.
Storm
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Oh yeah, I have to agree, WOW sums this up perfectly. The ending is just....MMMMMMMM!! Awesome poem. Thanks for entering and good luck!
Jeannie -
wow
Wow about sums it up, hard to add to that, this is a great poem, that reaches out to the reader, great job, blessings John
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