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The Great Escape

In late November, the rain fell solemnly on her while she walked
she questioned the world,
"Why do I even bother anymore?"
Her sighs deafened by the raindrops crashing -
crashing like the world around her.

Anger dwelling uncomfortably inside of her
like an itch you just can't scratch.
Her memories and dreams
thrown into the puddles beneath her.
Just when all hope is lost...

She turned to the great escape;
the greatest escape of them all.
When life gets too crazy,
and you just want to fall,
just close your eyes
and put on your headphones.

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Feeling icky right now, but I can't focus cuz I'm about to go see Social Code at my university for 5 bucks!
But yeah, this isn't finished, so if anyone wants to add on, feel free.

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  • Nephalaneous lover
    December 4, 2007

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    i like it so far, i cant wait to read more if you are going to write more, music the only release that makes us free, it is most sweetcontentment...