on the first every christmas
Dear Santa gave to me
a new potty where I should learn to pee.
On my second ever christmas
dear Santa gave to me
two teady bears
and a new potty where I should learn to pee.
On my third ever christmas
dear Santa gave to me
three Barney toys
two teady bears
and a new potty where I should learn to pee.
On my fourth ever christmas
dear Santa gave to me
four barbie dolls
three Barney toys
two teady bears
and a new potty where I should learn to pee.
On my fith ever christmas
dear Santa gave to me
five princess movies
four Barbie dolls
three Barney toys
two teady bears
and a new potty where I should learn to pee.
On my sixth ever christmas
dear Santa gave to me
six easy reading books
five princess movies
four Barbie dolls
ect...
On my seventh ever christmas
dear Santa gave to me
seven new board games
six easy reading books
five princess movies
ect...
On my eigth ever christmas
dear Santa gave to me
eight new computer games
seven new board games
six easy reading books
ect...
On my ninth ever christmas
dear "Santa" gave to me
nine play make-up kits
eight new computer games
seven new board games
ect...
On my tenth ever christmas
my parents gave to me
ten pairs of earings
nine play make up kits
eight new computer games
ect...
On my eleventh ever christmas
my parents gave to me
eleven training bras
ten pairs of earings
nine play make up kits
ect...
On my twelth ever christmas
my parents gave to me
twelve in style outfits
eleven training bras
ten pairs of earings
nine play make up kits
eight new computer games
seven new board games
six easy reading books
five princess movies
four Barbie dolls
three Barney toys
two teady bears
and a new potty where I should learn to pee.
Author notes
about a girl growing up and the gifts she recieves in her first 12 years
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Comments
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That was a unique spin you did on this. I love how the gifts become more mature and what girl is like to ask or get at that age.
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LOL! Very creative and well thought out.
I love the way that you put this together.
I am sure that a lot of people can relate to
this piece. Well done and good luck to you
with it here!
Jeremy0826
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