Captured for eternity... by Wolf Mistress at All poetry

I kiss your lips,
softly...
in the middle of the night...
Half asleep
you whisper my name…

Your hands
searching me,
touching my skin,
gentle…

I follow your moves
one by one,
until my body starts to shiver
and longs for more…

Something I want,
as long as possible…
Something you give,
as much as you can…

Right here in these arms
Touching me,
softly
Holding me close,
sensual and safe…
I can only long
to lay here,
by your side

Captured...
for eternity

Author notes

6) A poem on Love.

In a list

A loving wolf... • next in list

A contest entry

Erotica (Picture Prompt) by Beating. 450 points, ended December 1, 2007, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Odd........(CLICK ME) by Jaffa-. 510 points, ended February 6, 29 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

I can only long to lay here, by your side...

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Jaffa-
January 25

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I thought that was absolutly beautiful. So lovely. Great layout and it reads so well. Thanks for the amazing entry xo.
only4uangel
March 5, 2008

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really you wrote a lovely poem and the person is so lucky for whom you wrote this and i think you deserve more
- Wolf Mistress
  March 5, 2008
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  Thnxs so much for your lovely comment...I have already so much that I want...
DarkHunter
December 5, 2007

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Congratulations on winning bronze, you really deserved it. It's a real tender and sensual poem of love. I've been away for what feels like so long and now trying catching up on peoples work I am just blown away on how amazing they all are. You continue to grow as poet and it is a pleasure to read your lifes journey through your poetry, hope you will never stop.
Beating
December 1, 2007

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This definitely stands out from the other entries, seeing that this isn't too raw. And I like that. It's beautiful in its sensuality and just really good. Love it!
Warrior7
November 30, 2007

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A sensational piece you have written, very sensual and loving, your partner is very lucky to have you write such beautiful words.
LittleMoon
November 30, 2007
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Now this is just so softly beautiful, the kind of love we all dream of.
- Wolf Mistress
  March 5, 2008
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  Yes you are soooooo right....and it sure makes one feel good if your dream comes true
  
  Thank you
Whoochi
November 28, 2007

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this is good erotica, soft sensual, touching....now STAY outta my dreams...lol this is caressing to the heart & soul...could read over and over...best of luck babe!
SpydurPoet
November 27, 2007

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Wow. This was beautiful. You did a great job on not crossing a poetic line between sensuality and true erotica. I loved this.
Best of luck in the contest.
Write on.
~*~SP~*~
Whispering Wind
November 23, 2007

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O' my what beautiful words of love and need...sensual and safe Captured for eternity...sighs...Now this one I could come back and read many times over...Just lays so soft on the heart
wattle
November 22, 2007

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More of this and the world will heat up further, faster. ---- Everyone will dream better tonight, all hearing me, choose me. --- Thank you.
Black Swan Rose
November 22, 2007

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HMMMM sensually exquiste my dear...I dare say you are quite the romantic with just a touch of vixen

love is in the air, every where you look around...lalalala...yep I can smell it and it smells wonderful
Poetic Tasha
November 21, 2007

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oh twinny, YAY YAY YAY! this is so good, sensual, lovely. woohooo! happy dance!

best of luck in the contest,

Tasha
JeannieD Hunter
November 21, 2007

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Oh my my my...turning the A/C on...mmmm this is very sensual. My imagination was really fueled by your words. Awesome writing. Good luck in the contest.

Jeannie
Ephiphany
November 21, 2007

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this is so beautiful sis
I lubb the picture your words are so comforting in this piece....