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Promento (I Promise)

Encontré la verdad
marcado dentro de sus ojos
La llave a su corazón
En dos palabras simples
Usted me dio su ser
(su corazón)
Creo usted, el amor,
“Prometo”



(English):
I found the truth
Marked within your eyes
The key to your heart
In two simple words
You gave me your being
(your heart)
I believe you, love,
“I promise”

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  • Ryno
    November 24, 2007
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    Very strong Meg... It sounds and flows so good in the other Language too


  • DraconicPhantom
    November 21, 2007

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    I like this a lot, hun! Great piece!

    I miss you lots! Where have you been? I hope you're doing well. Happy Thanksgiving! <3 you lots!