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I’ll Give You My Soul

Give me your heart
I won’t use it, abuse it
Let me see your thoughts
Break down your barriers
Look into my eyes
And I’ll tell you no lies
I’ll give you my heart
Each beat is for you
I’ll give you my soul
I’ve no need for it now
Do what you must
In you I will trust
Love me, take me now
I’ll scream out your name
Hold me, break me now
I’ll crumble in your arms
I can’t put up a fight
I am yours for tonight
Forever yours…

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Written by Purplesuze (on AP)

I guess it's about needing to be loved by someone you adore, and not caring how desperate you may appear.

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  • PureCountry
    November 26, 2007

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    Wonderful Words

    Highlighting the fact that love is a give and take sceniro. Hopefully getting as much in return as we are giving to another.

    This poem flows beautifully, thanks for sharing.


  • PureRomance
    November 21, 2007

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    This is a very beautiful poem, and very well penned. You did a marvelous job with this piece. God bless you in all that you do and write, and good luck to you in this contest.