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buggar, its war!

blood,
guts,
bones,
spurt from his body.

his head,
his stomach,
his body,
blown apart.

their blood,
their carnage,
covers,
my trembleing body.

your arm,
lying limp,
on your lap,
tears streak your face.

his foot twisted,
his leg ripped,
from his body,
blood going everywhere.

a bullet,
flies,
into my stomach,
followed by more.

blood,
goes everywhere,
i can see my guts,
i fall face down,
into the stew,
of human remains!

A contest entry

morbid enough for ya?

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  • graphite
    November 25, 2007
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    gaaaaaaaahhhhh. trembleing> trembling?
    thanks for entering! =]