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[ wind whistling through trees ]

wind whistling through trees
feeling the chill in the air
time for the longjohns

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  • UnchartedPoet
    November 21, 2007

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    Ha this was cute, the beginnings of winter, break out the footies also, I like pink ones with my longjohns Thanks for entering my contest.

    Jen


  • azure85 gold member
    November 21, 2007

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    Very good haiku, I can feel that chill now! Ugh, I dislike those longjohns though, hurry up spring! An excellent haiku!


    • Pollycheck
      November 21, 2007
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      Susie

      Thank you for your kind comments. I too, am not looking forward to the cold weather that is about to be on us. I would rather it be July the whole year long.