I've been strapped into a rollercoaster
of perpetual hate and happiness.
This never ending ride,
that has taken off.
One day i'm up,
the next day i'm down.
It's giving me motion sickness
and it shows no signs of stopping.
Quick, pass the dramamine
before I pass out
on this rollercoaster of
perpetual hate and happiness.
If you've never been
on this obnoxious ride
don't worry-
you will be soon.
Sitting next to me,
our hands in the air,
enjoying the ups,
loathing the downs.
Author notes
Maybe im a girl , maybe im a lonley girl whose in the middle of something that she dosnt really understand
Baby wont you help me understand.
-Jem , Maybe im amazed
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I like the end "enjoying the ups, loathing the downs". You described the feeling really well, so yeah...
*insert 3 smileys here*
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