Human souls,
Ripped about, with blissful,
Ignorance.
Human lives burried.
Under the care of,
Lives too rich to knowlege their,
Pain.
Human hearts.
Torn under power hungry beasts,
Never drop a penny, for those in need.
Never drop a dime to cleanse a,
Disease.
Battered cages.
Are where the lives are left,
Oh those who have no loved ones.
Are left to rot in their pain.
Ditched by those who they call,
Citizens.
lives,
Destroyed by,
Deeds of those,
Who don't care for,
The true citizens of the,
Nation, of desperate needs so why,
Is nothing done to help the people?
Who rot by ignorance of greed.
Author notes
"I was inspired to write this by Heather". At first I thought it would be difficult to do, but the thoughts flowed really well through my mind after reading it. It is based from a poem in the column contest she is a part of, i hope you all apprecieate this write and also read Dwellings write.
A contest entry
- Prewrite Fiesta! - For my Favourites - by Never Fall in Love.
1250 points, ended March 13, 2008, 27 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What you think?
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Inspired by heather, indeed
She has some brilliant writes with some great truth! The ideas throughout the poem are heather's indeed - but put in your own beautiful words.
I love this poem for it's truth - as I agree as well
Never ♥
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WoW I am so glad you wrote about something that so many others hide from.
I am so glad you speak your mind.
This is an awesome write, that I hope many others will read. Every single word is true, as sad as it may be.
Thank you for writing this very meaningful piece of poetry.
Great job...
Loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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This is very imaginative and shows true poetic talent.
Well done
Raker
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another dark yet insperational write.
i like the idea behind this poem. man cannot see past his own nose.
a great write,
keep writing
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Really powerful and emotive bro. You have penned this really beautifully and has great meaning and depth within! Nice one!!!
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Although the structure changes, the flow is still awesome and flowing. The word choice is beautiful and really nice inspired piece
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this is such an amazing write inspired by heathers. its beautif written bro with the emotions to grip the reader. well done
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hehe thanks sis, did you notice the style of structure i used aswel throughout then changed it at the end lol what did you think of that was it ok?
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