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Darkness within me


I feel as though I am in a deep dark hole
Years of pain and misery lies within my soul
I am letting darkness overpower my life and my happiness
I realize I am drowning myself in my own misery
My life isn't worth anything anymore
I am scared
Scared of what may happen if I show myself
I have been hiding from everyone for so long
How can I overcome the darkness in my life
Then someone helped me to realize...
I wasn't hiding from everyone
I was hiding from myself
I finally found a reason to leave all the darkness behind me
You want to know my reason?...
It was you!!
Thankyou


Written By: Amber Nicole' Ferguson

A contest entry

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  • Cupcrazy gold member
    January 17, 2008
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    Wonderful emotional write. thanks for the great entry, hugs, Bunny


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    January 5, 2008
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    wonderrful show of emotion. best wishes.
    this was well penned.

    tory


  • MysteriousMoonlight
    December 4, 2007
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    Removing to close this contest. please enter in other contest

  • MysteriousMoonlight
    December 4, 2007

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    I'm sorry but could you please re enter this poem in a new contest i am holding because of some error made this contest will be shut down a new one will be started same type so don't change the poem please!


  • MysteriousMoonlight
    November 22, 2007
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    this is a good poem and it has an excellent flow of words.Good Luck!

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