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My Heart

I don't know how and I don't care why,
but you make my heart want to fly.

Some how your words pierce me like daggers,
feeling emotions stir like a hurricane for hours.

Every minute holds a memory of you,
everything shared felt strong and true.

Just the thought of you makes me want to smile
just seeing you makes me feel so alive.

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  • Blooming Poet
    December 29, 2007

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    I like the thought of a hurricane iin relatioin to emotions. Its so sad to start with and then at the end its more happy, I like that.


  • leander Moderators member
    November 26, 2007

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    There is a lot of tenderness captured within your words here. Truly a loving message that you send to the one you have written this for
    You have done a stellar job expressing your feelings and emotions.
    Keep it up!

    Leander


  • Emile
    November 21, 2007

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    Good

    Nicely put, well written with poetic flare. Nice flow of words attracting the reader with their impact, resulting in a pleasant sounding poem describing pains of the heart when love touches the soul.