Today is a Rainy Day.
I can not play outside.
But I Can still have fun in Here.
The Rain outside is Beautiful.
Like Every thing I could imagine.
I play with a friend,
and make a pillow fort what fun we have
until it is done raining.
I go outside.
It smells so good,
The Moss and leaves and the trees.
I wish I could smell this smell
Forever
Author notes
I HEART RAIN!
In a list
A contest entry
- Rainy Days-for kids 13 and under by azure85.
600 points, ended November 25, 2007, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1poem!!!!
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i love it!
I think this one it dedicated to rain! -
wow!
I really like this poem. It is so very sweet.
I have a best friend too who adores rain. 
I like how you say the rain is beautiful and you enjoy it from inside playing with your friend. It is brilliant you find something else to do yet enjoy the wonder of rain.
The smell is rather nice too. best of wishes in the contest! 
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What a great poem you have created! All the indoor fun, as you wait to go outside when the rain stops. The sights and sounds are wonderful, good job!
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Great write!! this is a good poem, i enjoyed reading this. I remember doing those things when i was younger, wish i could do them still.
I noticed one teeny tiny mistake in the third last line, you accidently put an 'f' at the end of 'and' other then that awesome job, keep up the good writing!
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I Fixed it!
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