You called me last night
And I tried to hide the pain
You said you loved me
And I tried to hide the shame
You said you'd be out soon
But soons not soon enough
The longer you stay in there
The harder it is to be tough
You said you niss me and I need you
Do you understand what I've been through
Just waiting and holding on
Nobody thinks or wants me to belong
I don't know what to do
Execpt I know I still love you
I just can't believe what it was for
Now I'm starting to think this love was a chore
I try to understand but the believe is going away
I don't know how to make you stay
When you get out how long will we be together
I know in my heart you'll say forever
But I'm starting to understand
So I'm hoping together, forever, we stand
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I really like this poem. You can feel your pain seeping out of the words. I also love the pictures, it fits your poem well.
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Totally Sweet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I love the imagery!!!!!!!! I think the sad poems are the best and this one is definately sad and depressing. And i love it!!!!!!!! One of the best poems i have ever read!!!!! Poems like this makes me want to go right my self. Or drink a tall glass of happyness!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Well any ways this is a total great poem.Its full of hatred my favorite felling. Totally sweet! Cant wait to read more of your poems.
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