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It's Just Life

Growing up is a normal thing
Growing the hair
Getting a job
It's just life

But deep down inside
Everybody scared

They'd don't want to grow old
They want to play forever
Live forever

But it's life
Nothing we can do
Sept carry on with it

Others will brake down a cry
Cut the life to hell
Drink till they can't anymore

I don't see the point anymore
I work
I love my women
I hope to raise a family one day
I will die one day

And that makes me smile


It's just Life

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First poem in awile, please tell me what you think.

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  • Lafayette Sunshine
    November 26, 2007

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    Splendid

    Heywo. I haven't read your poetry in a while. I"ve been thinking about this alot lately :] IT is life, and it's pretty pointless when one really thinks about it. We doa ll this shit to get through it but all we're really working for is to die. And I've slowly been learning to accept that and mvoe on with my life and not be so scared :] Good poem though good to see that you still haven't lost your touch.
    Love ya.
    Bye byes.