I am in the lilies that surround you,
and then in the light.
I am here in every light.
You needn’t look into the sky
because I am right by your side.
Close your eyes, and put your
hand on your heart.
I am the feeling of love deep inside
and I am the beat.
If you find yourself overwhelmed
by life and need a friend for comfort,
just look in the mirror and
wipe away your tears because
I am in your reflection.
I am the rhythm in your favourite
song; the words you hold dear.
I am in every word you share with me,
I hear you.
If you listen you’ll hear me too,
not in the voice of your memories
but I am the breeze of summer,
the leaves of autumn, the flakes
of winter, and the lilies of spring.
I am in the lilies surrounding us,
and I am in the light, in every light.
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exceptional! A superb poem, a real pleasure to read, really well done, so pleased I spotted it in the lists, Thank you, WASP.
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:o WOW!
This poem takes my breath away. It's an incredible poem to say the least. I loved every word and I'm quite impressed with how the poem flowed so effortlessly. This is definitely the best poem I've read in a VERY long time. Congratulations.
-Tim
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Nice
It is a very sweet write. ^.^ It combines so much to bring everything together. Great choice of words they really bring out the images you are speaking of, but the flow seems a little off. Wonderful write though. ^.^ You should read my poem... "I am" Your idea here reminds me of it, and I think you would like it. Keep up the good work. -
that is some awesome writing, girl. very sweet. I like the third stanza a lot.
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Awww! that is so sweet and beautiful!!!
I loved it and the discriptions really took me there, so that i wasnt just reading a poem, i was witnessing everything.
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lovely
aw this is so beautifully sweet
I really love the imagery as well. Stunning :]
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