Deep within my heart resides
dark memories past, forsaken times
a well so deep of tears that shed
when emptiness invaded.
Many pseudo lights did give false hope
of starry nights and blissful days
yet none could keep this heart aflame
for brightness of deceit did glow.
Led astray with trusting heart
in innocence the dagger struck
life's essence slowly drips away
as solace burns to find a place.
With drowning sorrow comes a spark
a light of faith that may restore
shining through and curling round
to discover serendipity.
In a list
A contest entry
- Delightful Golden Beauty Picture Prompt. #2 by delightfulmess.
525 points, ended December 19, 2007, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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a good poem penned, dark and twisting yes but again there is hope at the end of the piece, a ray of light that saves.
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WOW!!! Fantastic work you've penned here! Grats on your gold!
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Congratulations Beautiful on Your Trophy win~
-throws confetti-
Woooooooo Hoooooooooo
-tags and runs away-
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Wow!!
Oh My!! Wowzers~~
These lines grab~
Heck all the lines grab
Many pseudo lights did give false hope
of starry nights and blissful days
yet none could keep this heart aflame
for brightness of deceit did glow.
Oy! That pulled hard~~
Wonderful take on the picture prompt
Thank You for sharing Your Talent
also Heart in this write!
Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Oh this is fantastic.
I love this entry.. thank you for entering it in my contest.
Delila
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led atray with trusting heart,,i wish you would lead me astray bless xxpp
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this is a tender and soft write which really creates beautiful imagery for the prompt. it really captures the reader. well done and best of luck
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You've written with such softness here... beautiful images that portray a picture without it ever needing to be shown... I love the word choice in this one
Karen
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love the graphics and writing is full of passion and fiting tittle .... i love it.... thanks for sharing
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