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School Days

For the worst school in the area,

Rejected by so many,

Isolated by all around me,

Entirely alone,

Singled out at school,

Loathed and bullied by all,

Always in my memory,

Never helped by anyone,

Depressed and deplored within those gates,

 

Rising above the hatred,

Exhuming strength from within,

Joy overcoming pain,

Easier day by day,

Confidence growing over time,

Twenty four years have passed.

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I Have Read The Rules.
My pen name is based on my time at senior school where i spent the worst 5 years of my life.

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  • captain howdy
    November 24, 2007
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    well, I can't say I'd do highscool all over again either. haha. too much fuss about nothing important.


  • libithina
    November 23, 2007

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    Yes, school days are not so good for so many are they? I see you work in a school, bet you try and make it cool, for those that come your way. Love Lib x


  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    November 23, 2007

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    Thank You For Entering

    Ummm Wow! I was totally blown away and extremely shocked that your poem was so dang deep and very personal as you shaed a dark sid eof you through this poem. It is extremely sad that you had so much crap happening through out high school but I do hope as you disguard the apst that your life will slowly brightne up and things will get better for you. any ways speaking from a stan point of view and going through that I had the exact same problem being isolated alone beaten up sconstantly spat on stepped on disguarded a sif I were a used piece of toilet paper ect. and looking back now 7 years ago for me ( graduated with a GED when I was 17 annd now am 24 ) any ways I just let it go. Yeah it screwed my life and future up but the point is to let go of all that and just move on with life. anyways nice poem good work and keep it up and Good Luck

  • crimsondew silver member
    November 21, 2007
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    ohhh...so sad...
    but well written..All the best!

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