in beginning of world love was not blind;
seeing even through thick darkness
with pupils of lynx in eyes of bat.
but one day, playing, dementia, irritated,
in an impulse of fury emptied eyes;
soon to the beasts condemned,
but Jupiter, smiling, feather commuted.
exciting laughters, creating symptoms of bursts
accompanying the love, in blind giggles.
like a person takes a blind man on road.
ionized time by invisible knots
undertakes the most simple journey,
aroused dementia in front to drive the steps.
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Prompt :Arousing the demented through giggling fits
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Hmmm..this is interesting. I couldn't make too much sense of it, but I'm not complaining. I loved your choice of words, like "lynx". But i thought it lacked a lot of grammar. Generally, though, I thought it was a very nice piece.
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Your prompt: Arousing the demented through giggling fits
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