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Twinkle star

Watching them twinkle
Seeing the blessing beauty
of a peaceful sight

Author notes

just a wild thought on stars.the reason for the backround is because the stars are there with the baby to show the "blessing of a pure sight"

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  • The Madman silver member
    November 23, 2007

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    Starry NItes

    You create a nice vision if a clear starry night,,if we could but mka a wish upon those stars...
    Best of luck in teh contest,

    Evan


  • CherryKiss
    November 21, 2007

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    Beautiful, calming haiku. I think every parent would find comfort in these few lines. Beautiful background too.


  • UnchartedPoet
    November 21, 2007

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    Beautiful and sweet, loved to watch my boys sleep, they are the twinkle of my eye and a blessing everyday Thank you for entering my contest.

    Jen


  • Mitzy
    November 21, 2007
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    my words as well! I love the bckground

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