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What A Treat

Mouth watering treat
Long and hard behind my head.
I definitely swallow,
And will drain that boner hollow.
Fill my mouth with your cum,
At my lips, down my chin, make it fun.
Make a trail from neck on south,
Watch this vixen get real loud.
Web of passion drips from my lips,
As your hands grip my hips.
Bump then grind, real deep,
Let the pre-cum seep.
I will suck real hard and bring it forth,
As my mouth travels North.
To stop at your bare nipples,
Raging mad desire’s, begin to triple.
Lust I see as I take it all in,
Feel your throbbing from deep within.
Part my thighs I slip a finger,
As your hardness before me lingers.
Tongue playing with a mushroom head,
Throbbing member now beat red.
Laying back he parts me,
Sinking his rod in so deep.
Bodies dance in perfect unity,
As we tremble into ecstasy.
Hot, moist, oh such a pleasure,
Sucking him off and filling with his treasure.
Upon heated sheets we do fall,
In a heap we are, passion had stripped us all.

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  • Griswold silver member
    November 21, 2007

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    Whew!!!! *booking flight now* Wonderfully hot erotic write my dear, as only you can do them. Love you baby...Scott


  • WillAlwaysLove silver member
    November 21, 2007
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    Great poem, I liked it. Great flow.
    Thank you for entering my contest and good luck


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    November 21, 2007

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    woah this is a hot write mum and is very vivid with imagery. hehe wasnt reading...honest well done and best of luck


  • Amera gold member
    November 21, 2007

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    Hot! sexy and filled with passion for Scott. I know he'll smile when he sees this.

    Love from your girl,
    Amera♥

  • SoulWhispher
    November 21, 2007
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    very sexy poem, passions primosed, love John


  • TwiztidMaggot
    November 21, 2007

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    wow. this was sexy. I love it! keep up your amazing work!!! Best of luck.

    Crimson

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