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Have we grown apart?

Have we grown apart?

You seem to pull away lately.

I loved you for 22 months.  & gave you my heart.

If this is the end you should know it ain't me.



We gave it our all maybe we can't fix it this time.

Draped over your shoulder as if I was for show.

Loving you should have been a crime.

How much you messed me up, I hope you never know.


I can't do this alone.

The newness has faded away.

Why won't you just pick up the phone?!

This too will pass I guess, & tomorrow is a new day.



Love Always

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  • poet2angels gold member
    November 23, 2007

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    Wonderful message in your poem...Great for the prompt!

    Lynda


  • parntsoftwins
    November 22, 2007

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    I liked the short and to the point take of this! Keep writing you are progressing with each one!


  • Ami amour
    November 21, 2007
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    Well done, filled with longing of something gone wrong.

    Ami