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Fool

Create a dream world
That love fits in
Paint it with warmth
And passion within
Smiles, laughter, and strength
A never-ending story
Blinded by lies you cannot see
And unforgotten memories
Your little box of love
That no one can fill
Is just make believe
It will never be real
Love is never what you want it to be
It isn’t this amazing neverland
That you see in your sleep
Uncover your heart from the sand
Uncover your eyes from lies
And see the truth standing before you
You are one of a kind
Alone, empty, true
Soul decaying in the sun
They watch paralyzed
As you come undone
“Love is always patient and kind”
Someone should have told you
They were all lies
The fairy tale endings
The happily ever after
They left you with nothing
But faint whispers and laughter
You are a fool
One of a kind
They will use you
And rob you blind
Jaded and worn
Faded inside
This is your hell
This is your life…

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  • AutumnsFlame
    January 16, 2008

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    Sad poem.... Good job with the sad factor. The last lines were really good.... I wasn't so sure about the rest of the poem though. It was alright. Some lines didn't rhyme though, which threw me off. Thank you for entering my contest.