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[ Gone, gone along, ]

Gone, gone along,
something more,
there's something more,
find the shore,
dive, go to,
look, look there,
it's there.

Jump now,
jump ship and swim,
swim fast, baby
and you'll make it to that shore
and on that bank there's something more,
something more for sure.

Go,
go look,
you'll see,
you don't have to sit there waiting for me.

Go,
go now,
I'll catch up,
and if I don't then it must have been my time to go.

You'll be OK there on the other side of that map
because you were meant to be.

I know you'll be you
and I'll still be here
and I'll still be me
and the miles,
those miles,
they don't matter to me, you'll see.

Just be and someday, we'll be
it'll be everything you thought it would be,
but right now, baby,
you've just got to go,
don't wait.
for I've got to be ready
to be me, you see.

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    November 21, 2007

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    G'Day mate

    I found myself re-reading this and repeating it out loud as it just so beautifully flowed down the page.

    Stay safe
    ~Amanda


  • parntsoftwins
    November 20, 2007

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    I really enjoyed this. The flow was great, the wording was wonderful. I loved how you thrust the emotions at the reader.