Extreme love from a dreamers mind
Like that crush on a schoolgirl
I adore her, my Valentine
A signature of Rose I leave at her door
My heart whispers softly.
Her eyes are aglow
Two hearts that are tender
Afraid not to show
I bow to her beauty
Sigh for her breast
Long for her lips
With one kiss I am blessed
Bestowed on me nightly
Her love and her charms
With visions of heaven
Safe and warm in my arms
By Bob Fox
A contest entry
- Calling ALL Hopeless Romantics Come on in and show me what you've got! by PureRomance.
525 points, ended November 23, 2007, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Oh friend of mine this is beautiful. You write of such love and I love it!
Lovely poem my dear, lovely.
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I'm running out of words to say for all your poems! They are all so great!! lol good work
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I feel the sighs of sweet romance cooing in the background. A helpless romantic you are showing your wonderful emotions in rainbows of colors.
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Another peek under your veil of cynicism, eh? Very sweet and romantic Bob! Envisioning heaven? WoW !!! I liked this one...
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I THOUGHT THIS HAD A SWEET TASTE OF INNOCENCE...AHHH TO BE YOUNG AND IN LOVE. GOOD LUCK IN THE CONTEST.. YOU ARE ALREADY A WINNER IN MY BOOK..
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Great, an adorable piece. Good Luck with it!
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Nice to see the romantic side of you, Bob. The trouble with us old romantics, though, is that we tend to place love itself on a pedestal--we give love too much importance, always seeking perfection where no such animal exists. Perfection is an illusion, an idealisation of the impossible--if we lower our sights a little, we may have more success. Personally, I'd rather have genuine liking and affection than delusional wishful thinking--romantic love is fine, but what are we left with when the bubble bursts?
Perhaps I'm turning into a cynic in my old age!
Cheers,
Bill
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Nope Bill
As I have said love is for the very young or the very old. Inbetween it is just sex.. Happy Thanksgiving
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True romance here Bob babe-can't beat it!
Might have a go myself!
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Breath taking~ you have such a way with these beautiful words for a womans heart..Winner for sure!
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Love
In all my life I have wondered what love is...then suddenly it hit me...It is honesty & trust, with fidelity & faith. Almost impossible to achieve
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A dreamers mind is never to be taken lightly.
Yours words-Two hearts that are tender,Afraid not to show--Innocent hearts, just so free,...how life changes us as we age,
and experience life.
Thanks for sharing...Peace ~ Mia Linda
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Shame
Is that love seems to be for the very young or old. Inbetween we tend to spend time loking for the pleasures of the flesh.. just my take dear
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this is a beautiful poem... great write. good luck in the contest..
kathy
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I like to see your soft and romantic side my friend. This is a lovely soft poem. Best wishes in the contest.
Margaret
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Hi Margaret
Funny. I put these things together very quickly & doubt myself all the time. But you are ver kind & I wish you & your family a very Happy Thanksgiving
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This is a very beautiful and amazing poem you've got here. You've done an excellent job with this. I love it. God bless you my fellow poet friend in everything that you do, and good luck to you and this poem of yours in this contest.
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