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Faith,
a single white feather
just as promised -
when I least expected it.

You're real.

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  • Stonecreek
    November 20, 2007

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    It' so simple, yet it manages to say many things if one reads it differently each time. It has good imagery, is clear and consice, and has a nice tone. The only qualm I have is the last line. It seems too upbeat an artifical with the excalamtion point.