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And It All Goes Downhill From Here

I'm slowly growing cold
life the one blunt bullet
slowly ripping its whole
in this cold and empty place called
my heart

It slowly pumps for you
but you just stab it
trickling tears of madness
I long for you
I long for the warmth of your body
pressing against mine
why can't you take a chance

why can't you be happy
why do you put yourself in this danger
trust me this is the end
put all your fears aside
run to me
I can show you love
I can give you what you deserve
but it seems you'd rather stray 

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  • forget my memories
    November 21, 2007

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    Wow i havn't read one of your poems in forever! you probley dont even remember me. you have an amazing way with words. I love how you ended it. let her know how much you can give her but it just seems like she would reather be alone. sad but great.