rich in flavor
brimming with
curiosity
past the etched glass
through the dismal view
drifts the inexplicable
as the oiled painting
the mirror so clear
waits a mere touch away
Portrayed simplicity
Ostensible demeanor
Rests your journeys door
Through tranquil shutters
Alleged peace
Lingers beyond the glass
Author notes
my prompt was windows... i took it as every window is a portal... like many beleived mirrors to be. so i acrosticked it at the bottom...
i have used 47 words.
i hope you enjoy it!
A contest entry
- Windows by hoodoolover.
700 points, ended November 25, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
well give it to me straight
Comments
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wow. awesome poem. i really enjoyed that oil painting reference. a totally different take on windows. i think you did well with the prompt. lovely.
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Wow, very good sis! I don't really know what "acrostic" means but whatever it is I'm sure this poem mirrors it perfectly. I love windows. They're simple things, yet they contain so much mystery. Great job, love ya!
Hannah
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acrostic is just spelling out the a word with the first letter in each line that's all
Sharing battles
Infused with hidden love
Simple bonds
Trace future paths
Eternally grateful
Regardless of contsant war
I just made an acrostic of te word sister.
thanks for the comment sis your the best... and i swear i'll comeent ALL your new poems right after i eat.
love ya
~theharvester
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Nicely done with the acrostic added, I like your take on the prompt, thanks very much for entering and please do not rate nor respond to this comment until after judging,
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I loved this one. I didn't notice the acrostic until you pointed it out in your notes. I really liked this one and how you used so many big words ahah I'm so dumb
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I love it. Very creative write for windows lol. Originality has always been your strongest suit. Well penned masterpiece.
Silvos.
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