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Happy 17th Birthday

ding-dong ditched at 8 A.M.
dazed eyes open to
blurred pastel blue and green
contact-corrected vision: “Happy Birthday!”
bordered by yellow stars
a driveway mural
by seventeen-year-old chalk artists,
the friendship’s love envied by all ages.




Author notes

Prompt: At the door
40 words or less

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
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Comments


  • BabyBun silver member
    January 9, 2008
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    Sweet work - you have talent! Good luck.


  • mysticstorm gold member
    November 20, 2007

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    How wonderfully sweet and creative. Special friendship is something all long for.
    Nicely done!
    Thank you for entering!