Oh my love
I do regard you as my sweetheart
as you are an aesthetic frau
I do revere you for your role in my life
while engrossing me
and energizing me to take you on my roll-away bed
for the love making
I do acquiesce that you take me
to the galaxy of bliss by your twinkles
but yet I do have a world-shaking writ
about your unprecedented conduct
as you are a human being like me
this way all the correlation
between you and me
persists as realistic and concordant
however, whenever you are unclad
while love making
an asymmetry of our reality
mobilizes me as dumbfounded
then while coursing for the ecstasy
I relinquish at your feet to make comprehend
the conundrum behind your temperament
since I cherish to a woman
and how that woman is turned in an angel
while stripping
It is a hypothesis which is a luminary
influencing me to adhere that you are not a human being
you are seraphic
Oh my love...
Author notes
option 6) Write about your beloved, if you have one or you wish someone to be your beloved.(HAPPY??)
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I live with one beloved
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since I cherish to a woman
and how that woman is turned in an angel
while stripping
It is a hypothesis which is a luminary
influencing me to adhere that you are not a human being
you are seraphic
Oh my love...
Cant help but highlighting the lines.....Awesome.you did a very good job, so lovely love for your beloved. I respect your love. -
Wow, this is amazing, I really like this.
Well done!
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beautiful-romantic. Your one beloved is a blessed beloved to have such love. good luck in the contest.
Smile,
Judy
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Beautiful, just lovely. I liked the wording, I always look for the different verbs for meanings. Well done on that. The idea of this poem is pretty and the love and adoren emotion for women it strong. Well done, and good luck.
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profound and most engaging piece...what a way to express your love and admiration for the one you love. The respect you feel for her is well documented here. I dare say quite a wonderful piece!!!!!
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