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He Only Wanted

He Only Wanted
He always wanted a home
that he could call his own
when he was just a boy
his family was were he found joy
but it wasn't long before he started to feel
like a stranger drifting in and out
He always wanted a family
that was his own
and when he first saw her
he thought he'd found the one
but it wasn't long
before there lives tore them apart
Before he finally left
all he wanted
was for her to ask him to stay
to say she loved him one last time
but she just let him go
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  • Lunacatz
    November 26, 2007

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    i know

    i know of a few men who could relate with this. but i know an can feel where your comeing from on this. very soulfull.