coconut split curved like high heel,
mamma gave semi hard piece:
mouth smirks on chunk
splintering taste
with sharp point of un-even shoe;
not horizontally ready like that sandal style.
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30 words exactly.
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A contest entry
- brevity by Melissa Gayle.
5500 points, ended November 25, 2007, 21 entries
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hmm, this sits on that line for me -
for right now it will be included in the finalists list.
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