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Victim

Come again
Come again
Let me begin

I warned you once
But you wouldn't go away
Like a putts
Now you're going to pay

You came again
Here today
Now theres no time to
Go away
You're stuck here with me
You're gonna pay

Let me begin to build
To the climax now
The pain that has yet to come
Will cease once its begun
I will follow through
Hold my word to you
Blood will hit the ground
Faster as your heart begins to pound

Let me take you through this world today
Show you where you've to stay
I will begin in this door
Humiliate like a whore

What is that, that you see?
Could have cum from me
Is it drenching on your face
Will you begin to hold pace

To the next room
Here we will start soon
Make you scream unlike before
This time you're not the whore

Rusty hook
in the flesh
Rip and rend
Blood tears just don't mesh

Cry away
Cry away
You dirty bitch

Cry away
Cry away
Fill my cup with your tear

I will drink
Every fluid
That you make
I will watch
As you turn away
In disgust

What is this
Are you
About to faint?

It doesn't matter
hold this in thought
Im gonna fuck you
Im gonna cut you
Im gonna eat you
Until you rot

Your life is doomed here with me
Your death is the key
That maybe will set you free

Look around
You are doomed
Stuck here with me

We're astranged
and now fucking deranged
You can't
GET AWAY

You won't get away!
Your doom is set in stone,
Your last breath
Will be a moan
Lost, raped,
A tool for lust
This what you get
When you trust

Gonna kill...
Gonna kill...

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  • Lamia
    November 21, 2007

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    I'm so glad you're posting stuff again. This was brilliant. It drips with beautiful evil and I loved it. You can feel the passion and domination radiate from every word. Again I say brilliant
    P.S. I like how you tagged it as humour. A nice touch.


  • Emile
    November 20, 2007
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    Very good

    Your characters come alive and breathe drawing life from your words. This is well penned with deep thoughts and subtle strokes of sadistic yearnings painting your words with a sensual dark energy. Your use of descriptive wording and the outstanding imagery bring this piece to life and give it soul.