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Spring

In the Spring rain falls
Down mountains creeks, streams, and falls
Quenching nature's thirst.

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  • Seeking Peace silver member
    November 20, 2007

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    This is beautiful, such perfect pictures of nature with this piece, I wish you luck for this contest

    Karen


  • UnchartedPoet
    November 20, 2007

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    Nicely written, natures own water fountain springing forth. Thanks for entering my contest.

    Jen


  • Emile
    November 20, 2007

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    May I suggest the first line read "Spring rains fall gently" Wonderful imagery and cadence to this poem. Your thoughts come alive and breathe within your words. An absolute delight to read with a mystical flowing beat that welcomes the experience with open arms.