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My Christmas Dream

I had a dream just last night
Filled with magic, a wonderful delight
I was back in my childhood home
Winter time then was very well known

There was snow piled up all around
It looked like it had spent days falling down
I was happy that the roads were all clear
Not a patch of ice or bit of snow lingered near

It was that happy time of year
When you knew that Christmas was near
Everyone was jolly and full of mirth
Enjoying the season for all it was worth

Now this alone was such a great dream
No way could it get better it would seem
But the best part was still to come
For this special dream was so much fun

I went outside to have a look around
When low and behold I heard a strange sound
A tiny tinkling like far away bells
They sounded so high but it was hard to tell

I looked up for a second at the night time sky
And caught a glance of an object flying by
It took me a minute to make it out
Then I knew it was Santa without a doubt

I was so scared he would fly off real fast
Without even stopping as he flew past
But he flew up high in front of the moon
Then circled around with a sharp left turn

He was getting closer, I could tell
The excitement was so great I wanted to yell
He landed his sleigh right in front of me
Then out he got so I could see

He looked so happy, a big smile in place
As he enfolded me in his warm embrace
And as he wished me joy for years to come
I felt like I had finally earned it some

This dream made me feel so good inside
Reminding me that goodness still abides
If we open our hearts and let the spirit in
Then it will always be Christmas time my friend

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  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    December 10, 2007

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    This is such a beautiful story that you have
    written here with some wonderful imagery.
    I really enjoyed this piece from you. Great
    work, good luck to you with it, and keep up
    the wonderful work here my friend! Merry Christmas
    to you and yours!




    Jeremy0826

  • Judith Chandler
    November 22, 2007

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    You had me in tears for a moment. What good times they were! Oh well, I try to make it good for my nieces and nephews though I'll be busy working a lot of the time. Merry Christmas, even though it's a ways off. And I like the four line stanzas and the rhyme scheme you've got going there.


  • Rebekah-Ann silver member
    November 22, 2007
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    very much the same as the previous one! Yet I like this also!!!

    All the best!!!


  • Elvenfairy
    November 21, 2007

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    this was such a great poem it made my skin tingle! Great write, wonderful dream. Thanks for entering my contest. Merry christmas and good luck!


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    November 21, 2007

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    There was snow piled up all around
    It looked like it had spent days falling down
    I was happy that the roads were all clear
    Not a patch of ice or bit of snow lingered near

    I love all of this poem, but the above made me really feel.
    Christmas must be so magical in your home Cathy
    and you express it with your heart and inner soul
    hugs xxx

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