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Author notes
A
Taditional Haiku'
Syllable count:
5-7-5
Seasons' Greetings!
A contest entry
- Haiku-Me.....Me Haiku by UnchartedPoet.
1100 points, ended November 23, 2007, 23 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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It's a long hike to snow here...
But two of the mountains had snow for Christmas!
So pretty to look at....from the beach!
*PEACE*
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Hi Julie ~
I am here in southern CA where you can look south and see the beach.........look north and see the snow covered mountains........soooo pretty!
Night,
Bear ~
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I'll keep this one in mind as we wait for a promised white Christmas Eve...the poem nicely captures the sense of anticipation, of eagerly awaited change. nicely done.
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Thank you ~
I still anticipate colder weather.....wish I could see snow this year ~
Ironic, huh?
Happy Holidays to you & yours,
Bear ~
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Excellent haiku, Bear!
I really like the AHA moment you penned with "tongues catching snowflakes." This has excellent use of sense imagery, especially the senses of touch, smell, taste, and sight. I love to read and write winter haiku to permeate the senses. Bravo!! Don
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WONDERFUL!!
And a Merry Christmas to you too Arkbear! Congratulations on the award! Nicely done! Hope to hear from you soon!
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Great Haiku
I used to spend hours trying to catch snow with my tongue when I was little of course. This was a wonderful reminder. Love the snowflakes to, great touch. Well done on the HM -
Cute
Liked this as it brings back memories of youtful days doing just that. Nicely done and best wishes in teh contest.
Evan
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Guilty
This is a good one, I like Haiku's, I personally suck at them though.
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Nicely done and kind of fun. Good sense of the transitions and seasons.
Tom B.
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Ahhh you know this is exactly how the perfect haiku should be.... perfection in imagery and form, I bow down immediatly
Karen
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Sweet imagery my friend, very nice!
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Yum, just like being a little kid at first snow Thanks for entering my contest.
Jen
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Send some of that snow here to Texas!
Bear, this is sweet and gentle; I love it!
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Not where we are, Bear... get out of that nostalgic christmas mood
... knowing southern California, about half of the families here will spend it at the beach, LOL.... mid 80s will be my guess.
Still, a very cute poem with a lovely presentation. You manage to capture a lot in your 'ku s -
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Thank you Bubba ~
If it gets below 80, will you come warm me up?
hehe ~
.....yes, I still have my summer fur coat on.....almost bald!
Brrrr....just got a chill
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