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The SSS

Sinking underneath
my hanging head.
My body slowly
dissolves with
the concrete below.
My life has been stolen
by my guilty pleasure.
The pain is wreething
though my watery eyes.
I made a choice.
I chose to act now,
pay later.
Now the guilt
is unbearable.
My heart slowly turns
to stone.
My mind
has withered away.
All I know,
all I feel,
has melted in the
darkness today.

Now my soul
is lost.
It'll never be found.
Who would want
such a dirty
thing,
all shriveled
and worn out.
The life is completely
gone now.
The pain has stopped.
I no longer
exist in a world
where people have sympathy.

I belong to the Shattered Souls Society.

Author notes

It's funny, I was actually typing really slowly when writing this poem, as if the words needed time to come out onto the page. ***PICTURE #1***

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  • workingharleylady
    November 26, 2007

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    It's almost an epiphany isnt it when a powerful write flows out of you with little or no effort. Very nicely penned my dear poetess. Chrissy