Sweet darkness covers the enchanted sky,
Provision of light, sorrowful moon's eye.
A prince of peace, a savior of time,
Waits for the morning star; gloried sunshine.
True love; the catalyst of this waiting,
Idolization of a princess. Kaitlin.
A girl of two worlds, a princess by day,
And when night takes hold, a sea nympth at play.
She won his heart saving him from death,
Love a clever thing, hidden in her breath.
But unable to commit, his love so unpure,
She refused him her love, left him onshore.
So to be redeemed is his simplistic goal,
For this girl he loves, posseses his soul.
And so he waits, until the bright sun rises,
When the Princess Kaitlin removes her guises.
Hopefully she will stay, listening to his pleas,
Or he'll spend his life waiting, forever by the sea.
Author notes
Option 3.
A contest entry
- First Options Contest! by RuLives4GodOnly.
450 points, ended January 2, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Wow. Well, you sure took those words and turned into a very nice love poem. Very poetic indeed. I liked how you did this. Anyways, great flow, nice rhyme, man you must do it all the time. lol Good luck here my friend
God Bless You!!
Charles
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Waiting for love huh? Nice turn out. I admit, this was a very inisual piece as it was not what I expected it to be. I liked it alot! Good luck inmy contest all may God bless you!
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