celebrated
mute
hears phrases
rather than words
sensory is
a finger
in mental ability
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A contest entry
- 14 words by lee-sharp.
14000 points, ended November 24, 2007, 66 entries
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I used to teach myself morse code, but I've forgotten it all. All I know is SOS ...---... haha. Some day I will get it to remain in my memory.
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Ah! Last three verses I wish I could keep in mind for the rest of the day. You're genius stuff girl.
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your poetrys great
YOU LIVE IN SWEDEN??
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yeh. i wish i lived in a hot place. it's boring here
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I love patterns, love them because we can find them in anything, it's in our nature to do so.
Like waiting until the patterns in paint begin to speak ..as old Leonardo used to instruct his students to do..
I love poetry as well because it forces us to go with our own reflexive patterns, or beyond them, either way it makes us ..connect symbols to draw an image.
I keep coming back to this, trying to pinpoint what it wants to be for me, but there's a few of them fighting.. so right now I'm simply going to call the one I see
poetry... and be happy with that
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when i was little, like 4 or 5, i drew hundreds of images from patterns in nature. many of them from the grain of wood. two of them are displayed at Stockholm University. One is a lake, the other four bears following a trail of ants. you're pretty
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Wood makes a wonderful study.. the grains.. like an ink blot test you can find whatever you want to in them. Escher made beautiful patterns.
so are you.
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escher is hands down my favorite artist
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Mine as well.. and I have a difficult time using color when I draw, I'm more comfortable with ink and geometric lines. Color muddies the concept.
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mind codes information into metaphor(language)
every body extension
is a sensor in mental ability
would be interesting to see this developed further in feeling/emotion processing ability
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exactly, and that's why being mute is like a tree losing a a single branch. minds, like trees grow, and can not be handicapped unless it completey withers.
speech is one of many ways of communication.
morse code happens to be my favorite way, and because of that, i can copy 68 words per minute, hence, "she hears phrases, rather than words."
this is a tiny 14 word metaphor written for a contest. i've written essays about mind process and body sensory. thanks -
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we all hear phrases and that's why metaphor is interesting since our personal perception "alters" what we have been already thought a word means
that's why I'm interested in hearing your opinion on the difference (if it exists) between feeling and thinking -
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it's relative
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