It pulses through my veins like blood,
It lives inside my soul,
Helping me to keep the beat in life,
It helps me to feel whole;
I can't imagaine life without it,
I need it like the air,
Teaching me to live my life
Like and answer to a prayer.
Author notes
Sorry... I had writer's block and I was listening to Meadovale, so it's the best I could do.
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First:
"Author notes
Sorry... I had writer's block and I was listening to Meadovale, so it's the best I could do."
never apologize... an unique part of poetry is that it 'is' individual -- it is to be 'about you' and what you may want to show the world through your words.
As, I read your poem I could feel a beat to it so it definately has the poetic pulse. I enjoyed the simple rhyme [Soul - Whole & Air - Prayer] it is not so over-done it pulls the attention from the overall poem, but gives it a spin.
I enjoyed the piece a great deal ~ if you wrote this with writers block, I'd love to read a piece where your muse is out and wants to play. ~
Thank you for sharing your work with me, it was my pleasure to read and review. I hope you enjoy it too.
Best of luck to you,
Florida Sunshine
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oh. my. god.
i couldnt agree more with this!
Thank you and good luck in my contest!
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