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Life, Dream, Future

Not a life.
Not a dream,
but still a future.

Life attacks,
you may strike back
but there is nothing left to live it.
Only one thing keeps it going
      and that is love.
Even though it slows you down
even though it makes you blind
      it's still happiness.

Not a life.
Not a dream,
but still a future.

Best friendship forever?
    I truly hope so.
Love forever?
    I can't feel otherwise.
Shove away, get a man,
wait for one to get you.

Not a life.
Not a dream,
but still a future.

Relatonships are unnecessary
they are only meant to give you pain.
A future is necessary,
your best friend will help you get it.
        Keep the happiness.

Love is necessary
even if everyone thinks it just brings pain
    without it there is:

No life.
No dream.
Not even a future.

A friendship will help you for your future
      it may even help you with your love.
A love that can never fade,
and is still there inside.
But is hiding due to needing space.

A life,
A dream,
And a future.

Author notes

This kind of makes no sense...it's all over the place.

The last three lines, they are meant to say "Yeah this is going to happen this way" It's just like..a possible future you know? It's still there...I guess you could say.

It's very, very confusing and all over the place. But I like it.

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Comments


  • IceDrgn4
    November 23, 2007

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    Sorry to say but I didnt really like it. It didnt flow well for me, its like a bumpy unpaved road, but thats how you roll you know. You're raw and expressive, but I dunno, I just didnt enjoy this one

    • KaseyL
      November 24, 2007
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      Yeah, it's not really a poem...it's more like a story. A letter.

      You can't like everything that I write.