The manifestation
Of my feminine self
Borne into flesh
She alone
Can deliver ecstasy
In a list
A contest entry
- The Fantastic Fourteen by 2lullabyhaven.
475 points, ended December 10, 2007, 21 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Short pieces - Prewrites Allowed. Bring the good stuff! by Amunet Wolfbane.
1000 points, ended April 1, 2008, 58 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Simplicity, it's a remarkable thing. Love this
Favorite lines
"Borne into flesh
She alone
Can deliver ecstasy"
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this is a sexy piece. love it well done. thank you for entering. EmmyB
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cool, your emotion comes across really well
good luck
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This was nice and straightforward, it's good to get a short poem on something unique. I like the subtle bit of erotica going on in here, made me tingle a bit :-)
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Thank you for entering my short poems contest. Three cheers for the G spot. I did notice a typo.
Can deliver ectasy
should be:
Can deliver ecstasy -
Very nicely put! I love the way you wrote this...It sounds kind of like a book I've read..
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Any ectasy is a great feeling buit you are right! Only you yourself ,can get you there to those heights or dreams we are seeking!!
Rreturn the favor?
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Ohh nice one. You've got to wach those sex drives manifesting
One small thing on this, I wouldn't put caps in each line. But I do like this piece very much. Great job.
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Very subtle, classy way of taking this concept and becoming inspired. good luck and keep penning
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Interesting
This is one of those pieces I'm going to need to re-read several times....
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This sounds like a fixation hahaha a potent one at that...thanks for your entry into my contest and for editing
lol
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Please, it must be only 14 words to be considered, please edit...thanks
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