You're like a fart on the wind

My baby is back, I wear a big smile
heart was heavy at the betrayal
none here know all the

we have endured
but we trudge ever onward, our love is pure

Go ahead, just you try to drive a wedge
if you didn't know already, our love is pledged
we will be married, none can tear us apart
just go fade away in the wind like a fart

Stinking up the room for a minute or two
our happiness seems to be making you blue
I really don't care, you're nothing to us
go buy a ticket, stink up somebody else's bus.

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Love you Tory, forever baby.

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IamRemy
December 4, 2007
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Normally I dont like rhyme, but this poem showed it well. Nice comical writing!
islekine
November 25, 2007
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LMAO
What a nice way to say *F* off...lol...I love it!
Write on and on!
*PEACE*
Tirrell
November 20, 2007
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lol this is funny my friend,
nicely written, clear and concise.
x-Black-Butterfly-x
November 20, 2007

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haha yay shes back and she best not be leaving again she did nothing wrong and you both been through alot. well done
PassionsPromise
November 20, 2007

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LMAO....
well write for me damnit but leave the away from me... I had enough to last me awhile.
I love you too Scottie always

Tory