splashing waters call
birds delightfully give chase
I ponder the view
dashing sunlight warms
closely knit shadows falter
what's left is essence
amid the beauty
of the landscape it does dwell
winter wonder-land
A contest entry
- Haiku-Me.....Me Haiku by UnchartedPoet.
1100 points, ended November 23, 2007, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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it is nice to just sit and watch the world go by at times, enjoy those moments, no matter the season that is upon us, a good poem
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Yes, it is, isn't it..
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Nicely done, a lovely painted picture indeed Thank you for entering my contest.
Jen
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Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Such a beautiful peaceful setting you paint here. As one reads it you can't but help but want to grab a blanket, take your love hand in hand to this wondrous, serene setting, a sweet picnic for two, of food, wine and of each other....
And then you smack me with a winter setting! And besides being cold, snowmoblie suits don't shed so well...
Yet another treasure from your pen and heart, Pat...
I love reading your works..
Best wishes,
Evan
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Whar shall I do with you, Evan? hahaha you're so poetically charming...thanks
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